Writing a novel tell me if you like it?

an alright plot. why does the mother disinigrate? thats kinda different. and i like the names for the mutant dog thing. kinda like the twist ending if thats what youd call it but 1 question: how did they get to pluto? what did they teleport there in the middle of the night? lol. oh and i think it was revealed that pluto is not a planet. you should try mars. they say that it might be possible for a human to live on mars with the right supply of oxygen and all but idk if its true or not. but nobody would survive on pluto. other than that... pretty good...